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| Author: | Scatter [ 07 Aug 2005, 08:50 ] |
| Post subject: | Star Trek: Illustrious |
Hey peeps, I do lots of lurking, but not much posting round here. So I hope this doesn't contravene the advertising policy of the boards. Just thought I'd share my fanfic while we're all waiting patiently (yes Jiggly, patiently At the time of posting I am writing the seventeenth episode of the first season (eighteen eps per season). If things continue to develop as they are, and I can get the cgi and animation to a sufficient standard, then I'm going to animate this. But for now, it's a fanfic. Anyways, I'll post a new story every week (roughly), and any and all feedback is appreciated (although bear in mind, that the writing does get significantly better as I got more practice imo). Enjoy. |
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| Author: | UnDated [ 07 Aug 2005, 13:20 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Star Trek: Illustrious |
when is the next 1 due! (been waiting a while! |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 07 Aug 2005, 15:14 ] |
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Some really good ones keep them comming |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 07 Aug 2005, 15:17 ] |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 07 Aug 2005, 15:18 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 07 Aug 2005, 15:49 ] |
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| Author: | colione [ 07 Aug 2005, 18:00 ] |
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| Author: | CVN-65 [ 07 Aug 2005, 18:18 ] |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 07 Aug 2005, 20:27 ] |
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| Author: | colione [ 07 Aug 2005, 23:22 ] |
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| Author: | colione [ 08 Aug 2005, 02:19 ] |
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hhmm I read the first installment.. I gotta say it was great... I'm gonna skip sleep tonight and read as much as i can |
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| Author: | UnDated [ 08 Aug 2005, 14:16 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 08 Aug 2005, 16:53 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 08 Aug 2005, 17:54 ] |
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Finally... 117 - "Starting Again" The Illustrious is finally free to begin her mission of exploration. Much to the relief of the Captain and his crew. Meanwhile, political machinations within the upper echelons of Starfleet place Admiral Nechayev's position at risk - an event that could have serious repercussions for the Illustrious. |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 08 Aug 2005, 19:01 ] |
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Downloading now |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 09 Aug 2005, 10:40 ] |
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| Author: | UnDated [ 09 Aug 2005, 11:53 ] |
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thought it was good! 3.5/5 |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 09 Aug 2005, 15:09 ] |
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Good story line, not brilliant but 7/10 from me |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 09 Aug 2005, 15:34 ] |
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i'm guessing the bedroom scene couldn't hide the fact that it ain't the best i've written |
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| Author: | TrekBoyChris [ 09 Aug 2005, 15:41 ] |
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I still thought it was very good regardless |
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| Author: | colione [ 09 Aug 2005, 21:48 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 10 Aug 2005, 08:34 ] |
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Took a break from writing today, and whipped up these models - yeah, still thinking about animating this thing - in poser. The uniforms of the Deep Space Project, as worn by the Illustrious crew - Thoughts? |
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| Author: | colione [ 10 Aug 2005, 15:33 ] |
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| Author: | Matress_of_evil [ 10 Aug 2005, 17:50 ] |
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Yeah, that is certainly something that the Federation would portray around that period...even if it was unintentional. I like the fact you've updated the Com badge as well. That would certainly be in keeping with tradition... |
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| Author: | CVN-65 [ 10 Aug 2005, 19:05 ] |
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Kindda reminds me of this animation... Nice, anyway |
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| Author: | UnDated [ 12 Aug 2005, 11:28 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 12 Aug 2005, 12:26 ] |
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| Author: | UnDated [ 12 Aug 2005, 13:48 ] |
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| Author: | colione [ 12 Aug 2005, 15:05 ] |
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| Author: | Scatter [ 12 Aug 2005, 17:30 ] |
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i'm flattered. although i think my wife might be upset if i was to forego my business to write fanfic. maybe we should get a J.M. Strazynski type petition going to paramount... btw - i do list the approximate due date of the next story on the site. and while the stories might occassionally be late, they'll never be posted early. |
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