you wrote them!
there very good, (see the point when they are defending the colony u say the long range snesors are broken forever, well in the end you can use them... a minor point but better than nothing!
The characters are fleshy it doesnt focus on seven!
It would be interesting to make, as it is alot more realistic with proper conversations...
uve got skills!
(i also have far far too much time free as i read them all today in work!