The Viidians are a friendly race, with extremely advanced medical skills and they preserve life whenever possible. Viidians are favored by many races because of their peaceful and caring nature. However they also have a strong military arm, with enormous cruisers as the backbone of their defenses. Their ships are capable of making crippling blows to the enemies defenses.

perhaps this is better?

The Breen

The Breen are a strong military race. Their weapon technology are very advanced and they don’t show much mercy to their foes. The Breen utilize biological components in much of their technology, including their ships. The Breen warships are also equipped with cloaking devices which is a dangerous combination with their already deadly weapons. Breen brains are four-lobed which makes them unreadable for mind readers, they also have no blood. The Breen are known for their low integrity and backstabbing nature. The Breen are highly territorial and they destroy any ship that enters their space.

What do you think?

The Bajorans

Bajorans are a peaceful humanoid race, with ships that are capable of warp flight. They live on a fertile M class planet in a system called Bajor. They have a strong connection with their nature and surroundings and are specialized in art, philosophy, technology and architecture. Bajorans are led by a spiritual leader called the Kai, and by a provisional government. They are also known for their strength and endurance, during occupations and difficult times. Bajorans also are capable diplomats and can maintain relations with other races with relative ease.

The Akaali

The Akaali have a pre-industrial society based on a M-class planet. It is obvious that it would take a few more centuries before this race is capable of warp-flight. They are frightened for alien species and first contact should be carefully made. The Akaali are a friendly race, and are somewhat more developed in farming and medical treatments. Overall the Akaali don’t have much to offer to us, perhaps with assistance from us, they could grow into a part of our empire.

they all look good to me.

-----------------------------

The Chalnoth

The Chalnoth are an very violent race. They are large carnivorous beings, and have even been known to consume their enemies. The Chalnoth people live mainly in anarchy, although they will form small groups with a leader if it helps them. They are a spacefaring race, although nothing is known of their vessels. In diplomacy, step lightly with them, as they will kill any who threaten them.

Perhaps something about their technology? Or what kind of ships they use (if they use them ofcourse). If they have indeed poor technology, you could say something that they are a pre warp race or something...

i just received word that all races should perhaps get a different race discriptions per major race. Like the Klingons would look differently towards a specific race then the Federation would. This always can be done after we have finished the race discriptions of the race, just to let you know that we have enough work to do.

I changed a few things of the description.

The Chalnoth

The Chalnoth are an very violent race. They are large carnivorous beings, and have even been known to consume their enemies. The Chalnoth people live mainly in anarchy, although they will form small groups around a leader if it helps them. They are a spacefaring race, buying small vessels from other species. Their technology is behind that of other races. In diplomacy, step lightly with them, as they will kill any who threaten them.

The Cheronians

The Cheronians are a race of humanoids with bodies that are one side black and one side white. Racial conflict divides the race between those with black on the right side and those with white on the right side, with the cultural belief that what color the right side of you makes you superior or inferior. The Cheronians have a long history of aggression. They have life spans of tens of thousands of years and can biologically create large amounts of energy. Their technology and spacecraft are superior to most races.

The Corvallens

The Corvallens are a humanoid race, having red skin with a cracked appearance. They have an average amount of strength and their technology is equal to that of most races. They are a neutral race of mercenaries and traders. They usually run their trade between powers. They are considered untrustworthy by many because of the actions of their mercenaries.

This description isn't too good, but unluckily there isn't much information at all about this race.

The Evora

The Evora are a humanoid race of smaller stature. They live off a vegetarian diet. The Evora are very new to spacetravel and operate primitive warp ships. Although their ships are primitive, their technology is up to par with most civilizations. They are led by a regent, and are known to be very peaceful and diplomatic with other races.

Another short one, but what do you expect, they're called a minor race for a reason.

The Swarm

The Swarm are a highly aggressive race and have very territorial behavior. They do not hesitate to attack any ships that enter their space. Instead of using small amount of large ships like many species, the Swarm use thousands of very small ships to attack their enemies. Their ships are able to attach to another ship and drain it's energy. The Swarm's technology is advanced. Diplomacy is very difficult to undertake, as they are violent and their language is very difficult to translate.

Vulcans

Vulcans are a humanoid race, with copper-based blood, slightly green-tinted complexion and notably pointed ears. Vulcans have developed a culture dedicated to the complete mastery of logic, learning to suppress their once-violent emotions in nearly every aspect of their existence. Vulcans may seem arrogant, but they are very loyal to their allies and friends. They are also a race of exploration, and have strong ships mainly used for defending the borders of their empire. The Romulans are an offshoot of the Vulcan species.

What do you think about these, made by SonOfMogh:

http://botfii.armadafleetcommand.com/index.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=51

El-Aurian

The El-Aurians are a race of listeners, and also have some limited empathic abilities. This race also seems to feel changes in the time continuum.They have a lifespan of several centuries and therefor have many experiences and knowledge. Most El-Aurians are willing to help out other species to help them with their problems. El-Aurians are excellent diplomats but are also qualified in trade and technology. El-Aurian ships aren't build for combat, but are capable of defending themselves against intruders.

Perhaps this one needs some more thought

The Nyrians

The Nyrians are a humanoid race that excels at trickery of others. Their technology is advanced to the point where they have perfected long range transporting. Their ships are not usually used in battle, but can defend themselves. The Nyrians have been known to resort to piracy of passing ships to gain starships. Their species will first contact others seeming trustworthy, but are usually duplicitious in their motives.

The Halkans

The Halkans are a strictly peaceful race. The Halkans are committed to absolute peace at any cost. The Halkans have not had a war in over 10,000 years. The Halkan planet has large amounts of dilithium, causing envy among other races. Their technology is of a lower level and they are incapable of spacetravel. The Halkans have no interest in modern technology and prefer to be isolation from other races. They refuse to have relations with any race if it could cause any harm to anyone.

The Anaxar

The Anaxar are a highly intelligent spacefaring race. Their species are androgenous, have lifespans of 400 years. They breathe a nitrogen-methane atmosphere and live in cold environments. The Anaxar ships have advanced weapondry and advanced technology. Although the Anaxar are usually friendly, they will defend themselves if in danger.

The Benzites

The Benzites are a humanoid race from the planet Benzar who require a breathing mask when in oxygen atmosphere. They are a spacefaring species with blue-grey skin. They are highly intelligent in many fields, with their technology reflecting this fact. Benzites live in underground geostructures, with Benzites from the same geostructure looking identical. Benzites are competitive with each other and, because of their cultural upbringing, are constantly pushed to succeed but fear failure. Most Benzites are honest, perfectionist, and friendly, making diplomacy easier.

Wow, i wrote 4 in a day...i got WAY to much free time.

I'm a bit confused with this one, it is Axanar, not Anaxar, right?

Acamarians

The Acamarian species is a space faring race, with a somewhat violent past. The Acamarian culture is based around clans and these are considered of great social and political importance, although many conflicts between the various clans have turned into wars. The Acamarians have a government which is headed by a Sovereign. But the Acamarian race seems to become more friendly over the years, although they still rely on strong weapon technology. Acamarian ships are capable warships and are more then qualified enough to defend the Acamarians against most threats.

ya, it was supposed to be the Axanar, here's the revised version.

The Axanar

The Axanar are a highly intelligent spacefaring race. Their species are androgenous, have lifespans of 400 years. They breathe a nitrogen-methane atmosphere and live in cold environments. The Axanar ships have advanced weapondry and advanced technology. Although the Axanar are usually friendly, they will defend themselves if in danger.

I looked over SonOfMogh's descriptions for the majors and they look good to me.

The Risans

The Risans are a humanoid race from the planet Risa, who are considered by others to be hedonistic. They are capable of spaceflight, although they do not use it. They have an average level of technology. The culture of the Risans is focused at the pursuit of pleasure. They are a friendly and easygoing people, very willing to make friends.

The Karemma

The Karemma are a race that excels in trade. The Karemman look for trade opportunities wherever they go. Their starships are mostly made to trade and seek out others. These starships are only equipped with light weapons to defend themselves. They are behind in military technologies and average in most others. The Karemma are usually friendly and try to be on friendly terms with other races.

The Haakonians

The Haakonians are a war-like humanoid species. The Haakonians are ruled under a strict and exacting military order. The Haakonian weapon technology is superior to many, but they are lacking in many other areas. They expand their territory through disasterous wars and will use any means to continue this expansion. They do not deal well with others, using war to solve their problems.

The Bolians

The Bolians are a humanoid race easily identified by their blue skin and by a bifurcating ridge running vertically along their heads and bodies. The Bank of Bolias is the primary financial institute of the Bolians and many off-worlders. Bolian freighters can be found throughout many sectors. They are a friendly race, and don't have many ships build for battle. However the ships that are capable of defending themselves against attacks, are mostly used for escorting freighters on dangerous trade routes.

The Suliban

The Suliban are a humanoid species with mottled green skin. The Suliban are ruled under the Cabal, who recieve orders from an unknown person from the future. The Suliban have advanced technology because of the Cabal. The Cabal's military consists of genetically enhanced Suliban. The Cabal are known to be stealthy and deceitful, although the major population is friendly and peaceful.

i was going to write a descrption for the xindi, and was going to write it from the perspective that their homeworld was never destroyed (since in this they may never have had contact with feds, sphere builders). Since the avians were not extinct when they still had their homeworld, should i list all 6 of them or just the 5 shown in enterprise?

The Lurians

The Lurians are a semi-humanoid race from the Luria system. They have a large physique and are very strong. Lurians rarely speak unless necessary. They are a peaceful people, with no want for conquest. Most of their people who are spacefaring are merchants. They have an inferior level of technology. They are friendly to most races and encourage trade of resources and knowledge.

The Coridan

The Coridan are a humanoid species from the Coridan system. They are spacefaring, but have inferior technology in most other areas. Their planet has extensive amounts of dilithium, however, the Coridan have had difficulty mining it. Coridan was unified and achieve spaceflight shortly after the end of a centuries long civil war. They are friendly to other races, wishing for aid for their planet.