There doesn't seem to be one yet, so here goes. Using british english as it seems it's what's used in the texts. Here's part 1:


Races.xml

Humans
* pure coincedence pure coincidence
* Humanities' first Humanity's first
* profound affect profound effect
* alien species who alien species that
* had traveled had travelled
* of the their culture of their culture

Romulans
* descendants / descendents [both forms used: "descendants of Sargon's" , "their descendents"]
* "...across Vulcan in the 4th century, a minority rejected Surak's ideals; they departed Vulcan in the 4th century." [revise text, 4th century repeated]
* "...Remus was a harsh planet..." [in the game Remus is a Terran planet too]

Klingons
* (pronounced Kronos; (pronounced Kronos)
* "...an M-class planet..." [in the game it's an L-class planet]

Cardassians
* miltary dictatorship military dictatorship
* for its' fine art for its fine art

Jem'Hadar
* <SingularName>Jem'hadar</SingularName> <SingularName>Jem'Hadar</SingularName>
* <PluralName>Jem'hadar</PluralName> <PluralName>Jem'Hadar</PluralName>




HomeSystems.xml

- <HomeSystem Civilization="KLINGONS">
- <StarSystem Name="Qo'Nos" StarType="Red"> <StarSystem Name="Qo'noS" StarType="Red">
<Planet Name="Qo'nos Prime" Type="Jungle" Size="Large" /> <Planet Name="Qo'noS Prime" Type="Jungle" Size="Large" />

- <HomeSystem Civilization="DOMINION">
- <StarSystem Name="Omarion Nebula" StarType="Nebula"> <StarSystem Name="Omarion" StarType="Nebula">




CivStringDatabase.xml

- <CivString Key="DIPLOMAT_COMMEND_RELATIONSHIP_CALM">
<Value>We wish to congratulate you on your new relationship with the $MessageParameter.</Value>
[missing word "you"]

- <CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_GIFT_US">
<Value>Aggressive posturing by the {0} has left us no choice but to declare war!</Value>
- <CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_GIFT_THEM">
<Value>Truly, the tyranny of the {0} knows no limits. As of today, they have declared war on us.</Value>
[these are supposed to be about gifting stuff, not declaring war]

- <CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_MEMBERSHIP_REJECTED_US">
<Value>The {0} have been welcomed as members of the {1}.</Value>
- <CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_MEMBERSHIP_REJECTED_THEM">
<Value>The {0} have been welcomed as members of the {1}.</Value>
[these are identical, they should be different]




Civilizations.xml

Federation
* combat maneouveres combat manoeuvres

Romulans
* For its' talented intelligency agency For its talented intelligence agency
* how its' functions how its functions
* their maneuverability their manoeuvrability

Klingons
* dishonorable act dishonourable act [honour is used in line 2]
* <HomeSystemName>Qo'Nos</HomeSystemName> <HomeSystemName>Qo'noS</HomeSystemName>

Cardassians
* Their intelligence services, the Obsidian Order, are also very efficient, and is considered to be equally as dangerous as their military [revise text, singular/plural]

Dominion
* <Race>JEMHADAR</Race> <Race>JEM'HADAR</Race>
* the Founders Genetically the Founders genetically
* "These races include the mighty Jem'Hadar; perfect soldiers who are controlled by Psychotropically addictive drugs that only the Founders know how to make, and the Vorta; the "face and voice" of the Founders, their Diplomats, and the race that permits the Jem'Hadar access to Ketracel White supplies in exchange for their loyalty." [revise text?]
[suggestion: "These races include the mighty Jem'Hadar, perfect soldiers who are controlled by psychotropic addictive drugs that only the Founders know how to make; and the Vorta, the "face and voice" of the Founders, their Diplomats, and the race that permits the Jem'Hadar access to Ketracel White supplies in exchange for their loyalty."
* superior Genetic superior genetic

British English is being used simply because myself and Dafedz (The two main database writers) are British. The game can support as many languages as you can think of though, so you could also add in the American language if you wanted.

Adding languages would considerably increase the memory requirements for the game though, so I wouldn't recommend doing so unless you deleted the British English first.

Thanks for noticing these .Iceman, i'll get cracking on updating the game. Please don't attempt to physically make these updates to the files yourself though as the game heavily relies on the use of the editor; you may end up breaking your files if you manually edit them and you'll need to redownload the game if you haven't made backups.

Being portuguese, any "version" is good for me I actually think it's refreshing using british instead of american. It's pretty much like the portuguese/brasillian thing - and it irks me a bit seeing stuff in brasillian...

Anyways, here's some more stuff, some I'm not sure about:


Civilizations.xml - cont. (minors)

Ardanans
The Ardanan The Ardanans
if there to be if they're to be

Bajorans, Benzites:
Their texts mention the Federation. Maybe the texts should be neutral, in case you're playing another empire? Granted, it seems like some minors have a higher tendency to ally with specific empires, but I think these texts are the ones that popup when you meet the minor?

B'Omar
<DiplomacyReport>The B'omar <DiplomacyReport>The B'Omar

Ferengi
"their trading fleet is an unparralled economic force"
Does that word exist?

J'Naii
<DiplomacyReport>The J'naii <DiplomacyReport>The J'Naii

Kazon
difficult, difficult.

Skrreeans
<DiplomacyReport>The Sikarians <DiplomacyReport>The Skrreeans ??

Vidiians
disease that sweeping through disease that is sweeping through

Wadi
even in the stakes even if the stakes

Algolians
would be asset would be an asset

Anticans
species The Selay species, the Selay

Cytherians
Their tech curve is Supreme? (they're a MinorPower)

Deltans
deep feeling deep feelings ???

Haakonians
miss-deeds mis-deeds ???

Mintakans
<HomeSystemName>Mintakans</HomeSystemName>
Is the system name correct?

Ornarans
They're in the Beta Quadrant (Delos B), and their neighbours the Brekkians in the Alpha Q (Delos A) ?

Ventaxians
an moderately a moderately

Vori
They're in the Alpha Quadrant, and the Kradin in the Delta Q ?

Xyrillians
But importantly But more importantly

Zibalians
<HomeSystemName>Zabali</HomeSystemName> ???



For the following, I'm not sure if Civilization Key and Race are used anywhere in the game or just internally. Names with special characters basically, which were removed.


- <Civilization Key="BOMAR">
<Race>BOMAR</Race>
<ShortName>B'Omar</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="ELAURIANS">
<Race>ELAURIANS</Race>
<ShortName>El-Aurians</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="JNAII">
<Race>JNAII</Race>
<ShortName>J'Naii</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="SONA">
<Race>SONA</Race>
<ShortName>Son'a</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="TAKTAK">
<Race>TAKTAK</Race>
<ShortName>Tak Tak</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="TLANI">
<Race>TLANI</Race>
<ShortName>T'Lani</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="TROGORANS">
<Race>TROGORANS</Race>
<ShortName>T'Rogorans</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="BAKU">
<Race>BAKU</Race>
<ShortName>Ba'ku</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="BREELLIANS">
<Race>BREELLIANS</Race>
<ShortName>Bre'ellians</ShortName>

- <Civilization Key="NUUBARI">
<Race>NUUBARI</Race>
<ShortName>Nuu'bari</ShortName>

I've fixed most of the typos that you've mentioned, .Iceman, so thanks for that.

There's some points you should know though:

The Cytherians are supposed to have a Supreme tech rating - in fact, it should be even higher than that of the Empires. The Cytherians were a race from The Next Generation. They came from near the center of the Galaxy, and were made of pure energy, and were extremely advanced. They sent a probe out into space that made Lt. Barclay super-intelligent - and he made the Enterprise travel at something like Warp 200 so they could meet the Cytherians.

I've made the Brekkians a Beta Quadrant race to increase the liklihood the Ornarans and Brekkians will be neighbours. There were too many Alpha Quadrant races anyways. I also made the Vori a Delta Quadrant race.

The "Key" races is just something that is used internally by the game to determine which races can expand or have special abilities. The race identities must always be in capitals and must lack any apostrophes etc. The short name is the name that the race is commonly known as, (Eg. The Federation) and the long name is the full designation of that race. (Eg. The United Federation Of Planets) Don't worry about how it is written in the files, it's just the way the game works. All that matters is how the information is displayed, rather than how it is recorded.

I figured as much, just wanted to check with you. It was exactly the display part I wanted to check, not the internal status

Thx for the info on the Cytherians, it's been a while since I've watched anything Trek.

If you ever want info about any race, planet, technology, or concept in Trek, look no further than Memory Alpha; the Star Trek Wiki.

They've got a page on the Cytherians Here.

Yeah, I know about MemoryAlpha. Thanks.
I'll go through the rest of the files sunday or monday, and post the results then.

X-Ray Pulsar
pulses are also pulses also


Federation:

Type 1 Intel-Net
analyses analysis

Data Imagining
Wuth thus With this

Transport I
construction sites on construction sites; on
Survey rs Surveyors

Refering to my last post, is Data Imagining correct? I think the ResearchMatrix file calls it Data Imaging.


ResearchMatrix.xml

Data Imagining / Data Imaging

<Name>RA_NAME_MULTIFREQUENCY_BEAMS</Name>
<Description>RA_DESC_MULTIFREQUENCY_BEAMS</Description>
[there's an E missing in there]


TechTrees.xml

<Building>FED_REPLICATOR</Building>
<Building>FED_REPLICATOR_PLANTS</Building>
<Building>FED_REPLICATORS</Building>

Is this correct, there's a Replicator tech and a Replicators tech?

Research Matrix

Subspace Physics
behavior behaviour (british)



Encyclopedia

Cardassians
miltary military
its' fine art its fine art

Cardassian Mining Program
Bonuses +-1 Morale (the + sign is probably displayed by default?)

Yes, the plus sign is shown by default. All that matters is the minus sign, which means the Cardassian Mining Program has a -1 morale penalty. Removing the plus sign is a programming issue not a typo, so we would need to ask Mike about that. I had to ask him to implement the ability to have negative values in the first place, so the editor wasn't originally designed with these things in mind. Since Mike is working on Editor 3, it may be this bug will be removed from that Editor instead. I haven't asked him about it though as I just got so used to seeing it there.

Races.xml

Tamarians
Tradition Universal Translator technology would fail to process or interpret Tamarian speech.
[Tradicional, revision?]

Markalians
could effect could affect

Atreans
centuries,making centuries, making

Breen
show no little mercy show no mercy



Civilizations.xml

Ventaxians
are an moderately are a moderately



Not really typos, but stuff that falls in the general category of data editing:

Ornarans
Races.xml HomePlanetType = Barren
HomeSystems.xml Ornara = Medium Desert (Marginal)
doesn't match

HomeSystems.xml

Cytherians
Doesn't force the existence of a Terran planet, but HomePlanetType=Terran in Races.xml


TechTrees.xml

Takarians, Rakhosans, Ornarans, Mizarians, Skrreeans, Meridians, Horta, Halkans, Grazerites, Excalbians, Edo, Dremans, Brekkians, Barkonians, Ba'ku, Antedeans, Akaali
don't have any of the minors' general techs, only race-specific techs

Markalians
are missing the Basic Shipyard, they only have Medium and Advanced

Alsaurians
are missing the Advanced Shipyard, not sure if it's intended

- <TechTree Civilization="RAKHOSANS">
<Building>RAKHOSAN_SECURITY_BUREAU</Building>
<Building>RAKHOSAN_SURVEILLANCE_SYSTEM</Building>
missing H

- <TechTree Civilization="ALGOLIANS">
<Building>ALGOLEAN_EXOARCHAEOLOGY_COUNCIL</Building>



TechObjectDatabase.xml

Is the Minor Advanced Gravitron Shield supposed to have a BioTech PreReq?
Minor Air Command HQ does not have Minor Combat Grid as UpgradeOption.
Minor Combat Grid does not have the HomeSystem and OnePerSystem Restrictions.
MINOR_RACE_TACHYON_DEFENSE_GRID
Shipyards of Axanar do not obsolete the major empires' shipyards, only minors'.

Minors structures

Tamarians
Uzanis' Monument Uzani's Monument

Iyaarans
The Cultural Exchange refers to itself in its description as Iyaaran Cultural Interchange


Techs

Subspace Physics
behavior behaviour

Phase Convergence
area, A phaser's area. A phaser's
enermy enemy


Encyclopedia

Deuterium Plant
aqautic worlds aquatic worlds

Imperial Clinics
specialist specialists

Intel-Centre
Intel Centers Intel Centres

Organics Plant
possible possible.

Fed Cruiser III
Constitutions' Constitution
potentia ly potentially

Using the updated files:


Dominion
Jem'hadar Jem'Hadar (twice)

X-Ray Pulsar
are also obscure also obscure

Malcorian Geo-Studies Centre
Geo-studies centre Geo-Studies Centre

Subspace Physics
behavior behaviour


Encyclopedia:

Type 1 Security Centre
Security Center Security Centre
distasteful task distasteful task.
Dishonorable Dishonourable
Security Center Security Centre

Klingons
honor honour

Again, using the latest version you sent me:


Races.xml

Romulans
* but Remus suffered from planet notable only for its abundant Dilithium deposits.
[needs revision, resulting from a previous fix]

Cardassians
* for its' fine art for its fine art

Jem'Hadar
* <SingularName>Jem'hadar</SingularName> <SingularName>Jem'Hadar</SingularName>
* <PluralName>Jem'hadar</PluralName> <PluralName>Jem'Hadar</PluralName>
[probably why the starmap shows Jem'hadar like mentioned in the other thread]

Markalians
could effect could affect



Civilizations.xml

Federation
* combat maneouvers combat manoeuvres

Dominion
* These races include the mighty Jem'Hadar; perfect soldiers who are controlled by psychotropically addictive drugs that only the Founders know how to make; and the Vorta; the "face and voice" of the Founders; their Diplomats; and the race that permit the Jem'Hadar access to Ketracel White supplies in exchange for their loyalty.
[the semi-collons there are really weird, they should only separate the races, not make the pauses - that's what commas are for really]

Wadi
even in the stakes even if the stakes



Encyclopedia

Dominion
Rations Dispenser description
Ration Dispenser Rations Dispenser

Meridian
Planetary Research Station description
research Station Research Station

Deuterium Plant
aqautic worlds. aquatic worlds.
Aquatic Deuterium plants. Aquatic Deuterium Plants.

Jem'hadar Jem'Hadar
[same as above]

Research Matrix (\Strings\en.txt)

Subnucleonics
behavioral behavioural

Phase Convergence
area, A phaser's area. A phaser's
enermy enemy

Data Imagining (-> Data Imaging)
Wuth thus With this



Encyclopedia

Deuterium Plant
aqautic worlds aquatic worlds

Federation Berlin Class
carriyng carrying

Federation Icarus Class
text of the Oberth


Races.xml

Romulans
Remus rotatated Remus rotated

Ornarans
with felcium with Felicium
Ornarans have the unique ability to create a significant electrical discharge from their hands, while produced at great strain to the Ornaran it can incapacitate the unwary. [review]
Felicuim Felicium


HomeSystems.xml
- <HomeSystem Civilization="BYNARS">
- <StarSystem Name="Beta Megellan" StarType="Orange"> [Magellan]

Glad to see you're still around, .Iceman. I've fixed all these typos. Check your PM's for the latest game files.

Of course I am, why wouldn't I be?
About the files, can you attach them in the PM like you did before? I can't get through to mediafire... Thanks.

Oh, sorry about that, I forgot about your problems. Grr I just sent you a second update as well! I'll have to update it.

I'm trying to avoid using attachments because the forums can only hold so many. I've already had to increase the limits twice in the admin control options since Christmas. Can you make sure you delete the PM after you've downloaded the files?

Ok, I've deleted all the previous PMs with attachments. Will delete this one too as soon as I get the zip to my hd, just to be sure. Thanks.

(All attachments deleted)


Research Matrix (\Strings\en.txt)

Subnucleonics
its' management its management

Antimatter Fusion
conatainment procedures containment procedures

Matter Packets
before containment released ?


Encyclopedia

Mark I Starfleet Shipyard
Starfleet Mark I Shipyard Mark I Starfleet Shipyard

(Dominion) Rations Dispenser
Ration Dispensers Rations Dispensers

(Klingon) Combat Testing Center Combat Testing Centre

Cardassians
its' military its military
its' fine art its fine art
only only things only things

Cardassian Trager Class
The last sentence (Due to its...) needs reviewing


Races.xml

Ornarans
with Felcium with Felicium
ican incapacitate can incapacitate


HomeSystems.xml

- <HomeSystem Civilization="RAKHOSANS">
- <StarSystem Name="Rakosa">

I've fixed the problems now. I decided to rewrite the Ornaran encyclopedia entry again so it flows better and makes more sense.

comandeer ships commandeer ships ?
with Felcium with Felicium

A bit on the long side, relative to other minors' descriptions? Looks good though.

The descriptions vary in size, depending on how much we know about a race. The more we know, they bigger they will get. And remember, this is the encyclopedia entry, not the first contact report. The encyclopedia is supposed to be big because people *want* to read it; so they also want detailed info. It wouldn't make sense to put all that info in the first contact report since you've only just met them, and the first contact screen is a bit small.

I've fixed the typos. Bloody Felcium.

All I meant was that most (IIRC) of those entries (encyclopedia, not first contact) for minors are shorter. Actually, the original for the Ornarans IIRC was shorter too. That's all.


Encyclopedia

Deuterium Plant
so it ready so it is ready
aquatic worlds Aquatic worlds OR Aquatic worlds aquatic worlds
Aquatic Deuterium plants. Aquatic Deuterium Plants.

That might just be the way i've rewritten it; the original Ornaran entry was a single paragraph, but I split it up into three to make it easier to read. It is a *bit* longer than the original, but not as much as it looks.

I've fixed the Deuterium Plant. I've also added in the Moon Colonization structures, although Dafedz hasn't read my PM yet so they are far from finalised. I've also added some more names to the Nebula name list.

Check your PM's.

You mean the descriptions will not be fully disclosed on contact, and more info will displayed as time goes by? Never noticed that...



I'm not sure most people will want to read the descriptions. Some people just don't like big walls of text, some don't like to read period, others don't care, and others might not even find the descriptions buried in the encyclopedia.

@Mike:
Maybe it wouldn't be a bad idea to have either a window or a button (or any other way) that pops up a window in the diplomacy screen with a race's description (when it is selected).

---

edit:

TechTree.xml

Andorians
<Ship>ANDORIAN WARCRUISER_I</Ship>
<Ship>ANDORIAN_WARCRUISER_II</Ship>

(missing underscore in WarCruiser I)

I still like, "profound affect."

Encyclopedia

Cardassians
its' fine art its fine art

Rakhari
Oppose the natural order, OR be executed ?? Doesn't make sense
difficult to people difficult people

Ornarans
comandeer commandeer

Ba´ku
which grants them which grant them

Aquatic Deuterium Plant
aquatic worlds Aquatic worlds (for consistency) (also, shouldn't all Aquatic references be Oceanic?)

Protein Resequencers
Protein chains protein chains
unuseable unusable
result if often result is often

Replicator Plants
Replicator plants Replicator Plants OR replicator plants
from the our heavier from the heavier

Steam Vent Collectors
volcanic worlds Volcanic worlds
churning, water churning water

Type x Plasma Reactor
hydrogen Hydrogen (other descriptions use capital H)
fusion reactor Fusion Reactor

Agricultural Centres
Agricultural distribution centres agricultural distribution centres OR Agricultural Centres

Retail Outlets
Retail outlets Retail Outlets

Federation New York Class
Class vs class (multiple times)

Air Command HQ
plantform platform

Geosurvey Commission Branch
uses Geo-Survey Commission in its own description
review use of capitals in Geologists, Surveyors, Asteroid
neccesary necessary

Mark II Starfleet Shipyard
Mark I Basic Shipyard Mark I Starfleet Shipyard

Medical Centres
Medical Complexes medical complexes

Global Defense Net Global Defence Net
Canons Cannons

Cardassian Trager Class
the Tragers' sensor the Trager's sensor



Techs

Cold Fusion
has heralded have heralded

Gamma Fusion
Gamma Fusion Welding Gamma Fusion welding

Data Imaging
In Practice In practice

Subnucleonics
its' management its management

Protomatter
potoentially potentially
remainds remains
to me seen to be seen
controller controlled

Dilithium Bonding
Last half of the last sentence, does it make any sense?

Matter Packets
before containment released (review wording)
wastage, providing wastage and providing

Multifrequency Beam
operate of ??

Subspace Guidance
enermy enemy

Micropulsing
increases they increase

Duranium Microwelding
construction of amongst construction of, amongst

Transwarp
man pulated manipulated

Quantum Curviture Quantum Curvature
Quantum curviture Quantum Curvature

Nuclear Epitaxy
Nuclear epitaxy Nuclear Epitaxy
result the result, the

Electron Bonding
Electron bonding Electron Bonding

Microcrystal Memory
elimated eliminates

Ablative Matrices
Ablative matrices Ablative Matrices

Bio-Replication
artifially artificially
than a rova; tp ????

Anti-Matter Compression
a torpedoes a torpedo's
isotonage isotonnage
ractive reactive

Quantum Shaping
Quantum shaping Quantum Shaping

Metagenics
Protogentic Protogenic

Isolinear Optics
Isolinear optics Isolinear Optics
allow allows
rtrievel retrieval

Quantum Resonance
Quantum resonance Quantum Resonance
attainable of attainable by
the word "both" in the last sentence is not clear in what it refers to

Climate Control
Climate control Climate Control
immediage immediate

Antimatter Fusion
conatainment procedures containment procedures

Wave Analysis
provudes provides

Zero Point Energy
Zero point energy Zero Point Energy

Positronics
constaly constantly

Air Conversion
Coversnion Conversion

Biofiltration
elimate eliminate

Silicobiology
(Such as (such as

Transphasics
explonential exponential

Structures

Chalnoth Army
Chalnoth's desire Chalnoths' desire

(Chalnoth) Factory Program
Factory program Factory Program

(Klingon) Forced Labour Farms
forced-labor forced-labour
populace, (There...) but populace (there...), but

(Klingon) Combat Testing Centre
Combat Testing Center Combat Testing Centre

(Klingon) Dilithum Mining Prison
Dilithum Mining prison Dilithum Mining Prison
Mining Dilithum mining Dilithum

(Klingon) Hall of Warriors
honorable honourable
honor honour

Klingon Defence Force
Klingon defence force Klingon Defence Force
defense defence
Its' Its
defense defence
defence force Defence Force
defence force Defence Force
and crewed are crewed ?

Air Command HQ
defenses defences



Techs

(Klingon) Deep Space relay Deep Space Relay



Minors

Benzites first contact
industrial centers industrial centres

Bolians description
posses possess

Bre'ellians description
Bre'llians Bre'ellians

Markalians first contact
and they lucrative contacts ??